2013년 2월 27일 수요일

TOEFL Response #1 : Gosurei(고수레), Funny but Glittering


     Gosurei is a Korean traditional custom practiced by almost all people in korea actively even until several decades ago. Old men and women sometimes practice this, but is almost forgotten by the young generations these days. This custom is practiced by scooping up some of their meals and throwing it into the air before they start eating, saying ‘Gosurei.’ From my point of view, Gosurei is a valuable custom of Korea that must spread to the world since through practicing it, we can enhance humbleness, sympathy towards the poor, and feeling of unity.
     Through practicing Gosurei, people tried to thank the gods of the nature and the earth for giving them something to eat and letting them harvest. This was combined with many folk beliefs (saying there will be punishments from the nature if you don't practice Gosurei) and was done without exceptions. This made them feel that it is not themselves who grew the products but the gods, making them to be humble and kind. The farmers will not boast for good production but will give credits to the nature itself. Thus, Gosurei can control people's mind to be good and smooth as well.
     Let us take a look at the story which this custom was derived from. Gosurei started with a story of an old lady with her last name ‘Go.’ She survived until her last moments by getting help from farmers and workers. After she died of hunger, the farmers tried to comfort the poor spirit of the lady by giving up some of their meals for her. From this story, we can see that people who did this activity had pity and kind minds towards poor people and tried to help them through any means. By doing Gosurei these days, we are reminded of people who had no choice but to starve to death, and think about showing pity and fulfilling responsibility to share profit and help them.
     There is another story which Gosurei might have been started from. There was a burial of a lady with the last name ‘Go’. A farmer found it, and managed it nicely without purpose. Then, suddenly his farm's production increased massively. Other farmers who heard his news visited her burial, and each of them had their production improved. Farmers who lived so far away from the burial could not actually visit there, but only could throw some of their meal for the lady. This story tells us that the people, who were mostly farmers, wished for a good harvest very much. They would have sympathized with each other about the feeling and the desire towards a good harvest. This would have increased farmers' feeling of unity by practicing an unordinary custom together. This might have created a strong bond in farmers' society, and eased them to talk to each other and help each others' work.
     'Gosurei' may look hilarious and extraordinary to foreigners, and may seem that there is no specific or deep meaning. However, even nowadays, its value is shining. It can still benefit our lives by improving kind mind, pity and responsibility to the poor, and feeling of membership.

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  1. Hmm.... I'm a Korean (I assure you) and I've never heard of 고수레. On reading it, I thought it was a very unique topic to choose from.
    I like how you described 'Gosurei' in much detail. However, this essay does not go beyond that. The prompt says to explain your choice, and why you want others to adopt this tradition.

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  3. Hi. I am Seunghyun Lee, your classmate. I think your essay is really interesting. I can know about a traditional custom in Korea which I didn't notice before. I also understand that the Korea's traditional custom 'Gosurei' is unfamiliar to most people and you need to explain what it is. However, I think your essay gave more weight to explanation of 'Gosurei', rather than explaining your thoughts.

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  4. In terms of organization, your essay needs to be completely revamped: the first and second paragraphs should be combined into an introduction, avoid being repetitive, and focus on why it is important for other countries to adopt this custom, which you just barely touch. In other words, you do not respond to the prompt. I'm sure your next essay will be better though.

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  5. also, not sure how throwing food into the air can benefit the poor. . .are they supposed to scoop it off the ground? It sounds like a very custom specific to a particular region / village in Korea, and is far from being widespread. While I think humility isn't such a bad thing, I'm not sure throwing food up into air in a wasteful manner is the best way of displaying it. Guess I'm just a foreigner who can't understand Korea. . .

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  6. Hi I am Jeesun Park, and your topic, Gosurei, was very interesting topic since I've never seen anyone write about this custom. However, I don't think the origin of Gosurei, or in more accurate language marks, Gosure, you stated in your essay is that accurate. Also, it make your essay better if you lengthen your conclusion a little, with more sequences in it, in order to improve the unbalance between the body and your final paragraph. Bye!

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  7. That was an interesting topic! Go Su Re is very unique topic. Most students may not think about that topic. I liked the content as well, you gave very specific details and explanations about the cultural feature. So people who do not know about the Korea may understand Go Su Re easier. Korean funny custom may be advertised because of your essays. Your essay is really good.

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  8. Hi 진욱!
    Yong-han Jung.
    Before I read your essay, I didn't even know about the 고수레custom that we have. And I'm impressed that you have choose a unique topic that other students don't do(which can mean you have more knowledge about customs). But, I thought it would be better to split the paragraphs when you are explaing. This way your essay can look more structured and organized. Also, the different thing that I want to mention is about the acceptability. I think in other countries, throwing food into the air won't be easy for them to adopt. Because of the reason 고수레 is so unique custom that is limited in Korea, others might not understand the point of this custom.

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  9. Hello, this is Min!
    Well, actually it took me a while to understand this essay, because I have never heard of 고수레custom. Nevertheless, I thought it was a really fresh topic that caught my attention.

    However, if there is something to improve, I felt that there needs to be more correspondence with your essay and your topic. Though there are many reasons and details, I found it somewhat awkward in finding how it can be adopted to other countries.

    Thank you

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